Tag: Writing

Foreshadowing.

Here is my writing on foreshadowing in Dragon Ball .

For the last two weeks we have been studying the story of Dragon ball. Foreshadowing is really good for dragon ball because the author shows you what is going to happen next in the story. It shows things like fights, danger, someone died, you get the point. This makes Dragon ball AWESOME ,FUN.!!!

When the story foreshadows a new character is when someone asks another character to find someone. Another way is when someone is talking but you can only hear their voice. This makes you want to find out what he/she looks like and this is fun to watch.

New problems can happen when someone needs help or needs to defeat a bad guy and save the day. For example someone destroys 10 villages because his dad was a demon and no one let him stay. Therefore someone has to make him snap out of it.

New places can give clues to what the character is going to feel. Like feeling cold in a snowy place feeling hot in the desert. That is foreshadowing and it makes Dragon Ball fun to watch.

This is why I like foreshadowing in the stories I watch. I like cartoons, TV series, anime and more.! I hope to find out more about Dragon ball.

why we should save/not waste water.

Today Room 7 and I did Science experiment on saving water like doing little things for example having 5 minute showers and scraping the dishes not raising the plates, hang the towels nicely, use the same glass when you drink water. If we do these little things we can save enough water for everyone in the world so lets start saving water. And here is my video with me and my friend talking about water being saved don’t mind the noise in the background.

Wild things should be left alone.

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“Wild things should be left alone”.

Today Room 7 and I talked about the book we were reading called dragon ball. We talked about “Wild things should be left alone”. The wild thing is Goku in the conversation. I think that Goku should not be left alone because he might get too lonely. Goku’s Grandpa (Grandpa Gohan) Was squashed one night but no one knows what he was squashed by. 

Goku seems to change everyone from bad guys to good guys. I like that, to be honest. I would like to read more of this book to find out how Goku makes friends around the world. Like when Goku saw master Roshi fall through Kinto’un. He fell though because you need to be pure of heart to ride the cloud. 

Tina

Last Monday Room 7 and 8 had gone to the Due Drop Centre at Manukau to see the movie Tina.

On the way there to Due Drop Centre we saw places like Tip Top, KFC, Burger king and more. When we got to Due Drop Centre., we got inside we were the first school to get there. we saw many other high schools like One Tree Hill and more.

As we got in the theater we had to wait for 5 minutes for the movie to start. The movie was sad because at the start Tina’s daughter died due to an earthquake and Tina gets hired for a new Job at Francis High School on the second day Tina starts a choir. The rest of the teachers say NO cause they tried before but they let it happen. When Tina started the choir, there were a few people who were there. The next day lots of people came all because some random guy was followed by lots of people.

After a while Tina thought that they were good at best so she said that they should enter a contest called the BIG SING. So they said yes then they practiced and practice until Tina gets placed in the Hospital cause of cancer just before the big sing But they still went to contest and then they won. But its not all rainbows cause Tina Dies.

I would like to say thanks to the Due Drop Centre for letting us watch Tina.

 

Great Beginnings.

Today I have posted something that Room 7 has been doing as you see the title the program is called Great Beginnings. It is where when you write a story and you make the beginning the best part of the whole story. It allows the person reading the story to know what’s going on in the first paragraph of the story.

 

Another Murky Night With Jim.

The roads were silent that particular night. The only sound was the random machinery and a deer running around.

The soft mist suddenly enrolled on to the car window. But for some very good reason the deer ran right in front of you. You suddenly get a chill. You feel like there is something wrong with the deer so you waste no time to ram the deer over but you get even colder. You turn the heater to the highest but you just get colder. When you look at your friend Jim, he was dancing to the radio.

Another Murky Night With Jim.

The roads were silent that particular night. The only sound was the random machinery and a deer running around.

The soft mist suddenly enrolled on to the car window. But for some very good reason the deer ran right in front of you. You suddenly get a chill. You feel like there is something wrong with the deer so you waste no time to ram the deer over but you get even colder. You turn the heater to the highest but you just get colder. When you look at your friend Jim, he was dancing to the radio.

 

 

 

 

 

 

My report about my passion project.

Today I had to write about my passion project and you might be wondering what a passion project is. A passion project is one that we are really interested in a topic. This is what I wrote for my passion project report.

 

The Subaru WRX STI is popular because there are lots of boy racers who like fast cars. That’s why it is so expensive because everyone wants one. It is also a very popular rally car that has won places in many different rally competitions. 

Where was it made?

The Subaru’s origins came from Japan where it began as Fuji Heavy Industries ( FHI ) a company formed in 1953 from the merger of five companies including Nakajima aircraft co.

When was the Subaru first put into production?

The Subaru was made on the 15th of July in 1953, 71 years ago and STI was made in 1988, 37 years ago.

What was the Subaru WRX STI made for?

The Subaru wrx sti is the test subject for the world rally championships so when they use it for real races it is safe.

My sources of facts

  1. the car Subaru WRX STI
  3. Wikipedia

      3.youtube videos

 

what I’m looking forward to

I’m looking to be in the world rally championships because I like to drive fast cars ( in games ) also I hope that they make the cars so fast it burns into ashes.

Our Solar System

Last week Room 6 and I did our Solar System. We had to get in two pairs of partners and my partner was John and we had to choose one of the 8 planets to research. John and I got Venus.

 One fact about Venus is that the nickname for Venus is Morning Star and the Evening Star. Another fact is on Venus the highest a person can jump is about 67cm before taking off into space.

One mnemonic for our solar system that Mrs Agnew gave was MVEMJSUN which means My Very Energetic Mother Just Served Us Nachos.

Haiku Poem about Water Safety

This afternoon Room 6 and I did a Haiku Poem. The Haiku Poem is crafted from Japan. The Haiku poem is where you write three lines. In the first line you have to write five syllables and in the 2nd line you have to write 7 syllables and the 3rd line you write 5 syllables again. Look at this Haiku that I wrote.

Swimming is the best

Under the boat was awesome

Diving is cool too.